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JOHNfreedom1234's avatar

Oh hey, a rework, but first, that ending with the Tubman's flag waving in the air all set to Keisha is what hooked into this whole mess.

Secondly, Nice to see a few added details here and there, particularly with more detail in the transition, and some of the background lore (aerosolized fent? that's brutal).

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Steve Vale's avatar

AAV: The first vignette deserves a comment. Here it is. Good stuff.

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Noah Dorgan's avatar

What does CVCN Designate, I'm familiar with CVN but the extra C is new, at least to me

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Reconstructionist's avatar

Command (Like LCC, CBC, CLC/CC) — because it has facilities to host the staff from a numbered fleet afloat vs a normal carrier which primarily has space for a battle group staff

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Noah Dorgan's avatar

Ah, ok thank you

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Mako's avatar

What on earth does Miyake do to get into all these situations?

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